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Thursday 25 October 2012

The day at the beach. Narrative

It was a hot day, lots of people went to the beach to have a swim. They were jumping off the rocks to do bombs. But then this boy name John slipped over and cracked his head when he was trying to dive. His friend sprinted over and said, “Help my friend slipped over and cracked his head”.His parents called the ambulance to take him to the hospital.

His parents rushed in to visit him to see if he was ok.They were talking and eating. John said to his mum, I don’t want stay I am ok. So his mum asked the doctor if he can go home and he said yes.


When they got  back from the hospital. He was crying because his head still hurts. They were trying to cheer him up but he was still crying. A month later his head doesn’t hurt any more. He started to go play with friends again but never goes to the beach anymore.