Writhing Sample 2013 Term 4

Once upon time at a far, far village called Papakura, their lived a boy name Ben and a father named John. They lived in a tiny house with no tv ,no food and no money. They were the poorest in the village. Him and his dad does the papers to get money . People laughs at them, teased them and worst they throw rubbish at their house.

Then one night Ben and John went to do the papers. They were doing it normal walking slowly, then suddenly they heard a whisper from the bushes it whispered again and again and again. John said to his son ‘’hurry hurry I think their someone following us’. They started walking faster then suddenly someone just jumped out of the bush and started to  chase them.

They ran as fast as they can with the papers falling down.  John was starting to get tired. ‘Come’ said  Ben, then his father said ‘’you run i will take care of the person that is coming’. Ben started to run. The men caught up to John.

John hitted him with the papers then he tackled him to the ground, but the man just pushed him of. Then from nowhere the man pulled a gun out to shoot him but lucky Ben knocked him out with a rock on his hand. John said to his son ‘’I thought I told you to run’ Ben ‘’said its better together’.They laughed and they took the criminal to the police station and they rewarded one thousand dollar and they live happily ever after.

My first day of School

My first day of school I was nervous, shy and angry. My school name was Peace Chapel. I hopped into the car having butterflies. It was a long ride, but finally we got there. ‘’Tana  were their’ said my mum. Walking to the door feeling like I was gonna walk to a room with snakes and monsters. My mum opened the door to enter the school with all the people staring at us with me hiding at the back of my mum. I was shy as.

My mum took me to my class. I was holding to my mum’s hand hard like I was gonna fall down from a helicopter. I was scared as. Walking into the class like a robot with fear. My teachers name was Moana. I had to introduce myself. After i introduced myself. My mum was gonna go back home because she has to get ready for work. She  kissed me on the chick and she ‘’said bye son’.

I was crying not wanting her to leave me. My teacher was trying  to make me not cry by giving me lollies and saying ‘’its al right she's coming back after’’.  My teacher was kind to me. She said ‘your first day of school will be just playing’’. She was kind to me.

I was in the play ground then suddenly the bell rang, my teacher came upto  me and  said ‘school is finish’’. ‘Yes’ I said to myself. I was waiting for my mum, then Finally i saw her. I  ran up to her like a cheetah feeling so happy that the school is finish. After school my mum bought me a feed and wented back home.

All Blacks vs France Nov 10 2013

All blacks vs France with a fiercely contested match at Paris. They started the game with no tries just penalty goals by Daniel Carter just trading goals with Morgan Parra, the first 5 for  France. It was 9/9 on the first half. Then suddenly on the last half, All blacks comebacks with two tries by Kieran Read and Charles Piutau. But France hits back, with a line break by the full back that gave them a try. The points were 19 / 26. But the All Blacks defended them properly, till to the end and they won the game with the final points 19 / 26. All Blacks waiting for their next match against England.