The best day of my holiday

This morning we had 40 minutes to write anything we wanted. From this we are going to set some writing goals for the Term Here is what I wrote

On the holidays October 10th Thursday it was my Birthday. I woke up in the morning i walked into the bathroom to wash my face forgetting that it was my birthday, suddenly from out of no where my cousins yells ‘happy birthday Tana ‘.

I was so excited. My cousins took me to paint ball, my brother bought me a Rabbitohs jersey,my Uncle gave me money and my favourite, my Parents bought a massive feed. After all they sang the birthday song for me and we ate all together after. It was one of the best day of my life

The things that I like about my writing is that I'm using speech marks and my sentences making sense.

My goal for my writing is having interesting vocabs and showing not tell.

Yr6 - 1

6x43=

I done 6x40=240 and 6x3=18.  Then I added together and I  got my answer 258

Yr6 - 2

This is my D.L.O. This is a strategy that I used to fix this problem. 78 divide by 6. I done six groups then I splitted the 78 to tens, then I putted each tens in the 6 groups and the total was 60. Then I took away 60 from 78 and I got 18 leftover. Then I divided 18 by 6 and I got the answer 3. Then I plus the 10 and the 3 to get my answer 13. That how I worked it out.

Rainbow Warrior Bombing

One night in 1985, on July the 10th, Greenpeace people were celebrating the director of the anti-nuclear movement’s 29th birthday on the Rainbow Warrior. While they partied, two French man, in scuba gear, attached two limpet bombs to the bottom of the boat. ‘Boom boom’ exploded the bomb ‘Abandon ship Abandon ship’! said  Peter Willcox. Tragically the bomb killed one crew member. His name was Fernando Pereira

The French spies were working for the French government. Their mission was an undercover operation to explode the Rainbow Warrior, so they can stop them protesting about the nuclear testing in the South Pacific. 720 people got affected by the French people testing nuclear bombs around the Islands. People got cancer and their babies got deformities.  

Two of the spies got arrested by the police. They had to go to prison for 10 years, but the French government told them to bring the two to their prison or they won’t buy their dairy and other products. That was a lot of money that New Zealand were going to lose so they released the spies and spies went back to France.

Cross country 2013

On Thursday we had cross country. Tamaki service came to support us. We had to do 2 laps. They were doing by their years old but the 7&8 were doing it by the classes. Like the whole year 7 run there own and the whole year 8 do their own to. It took for ages waiting for the other class to finish but finally it was the year 8 boys turn.

When we walked up to Mr Burt I had butterflies i felt sick. We had to stay in a line and we had to wait for Mr Burt to say go. All of the boys were getting ready. Finally Mr Burt ‘said’ ‘get on your mark get set go’’”””””.

Suddenly we started running. All i can feel is the mud splashing into the back of my pant, my shoes covered with mud and a squeaking sound when I step into the mud. I was tired my legs muscle felt like it was gonna explode, it was even harder than i thought. I was so exhausted but i was still running.

Me and my friend Richard was running together. All i was thinking about was the cross country  finish. Finally I finished my 1st lap now I have to do the 2nd lap. I was so tired and i was still running together with Richard. I was running walking running and walking. I was exhausted  

Finally I can see the finish line. I was running fast as to finish it. But my paste started to go slow. I was jogging toward the finish line and all i can hear is people ’saying’ ‘go Tana and Richard’. Finally i finished it. Richard bate me but i was happy that i finished it. I was so tired. I went home and had a shower. I was proud of myself.

Tana and Lave Dare to be different Presentaion

Movie Refection

I like Antonio, Anthony and Texas movie,the funny part is how they cut there hair and I like their acting.

My negative things is how they sing and the song was too loud and we can’t hear them. My second negative thing is they do the same shots all over again and the camera keep on moving.