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Friday 16 November 2012

Lave and Tana and Marvin Barnyard Narittive

The sky was dim and the grass covered in dew. As two cousin were going to their uncle’s house they were moaning and complaining.  “I DON’T want to go there said Jacob “me too said’’  Vincent.

“I don’t like all the boards slapping,screeching noise,shafts of light and most of all it smells musty” said Jacob.Vincent didn’t like the fact that there uncle owned a barn.But they still got forced to  go to their uncle's barn.

Shivvers tingle down our spine while we explore the uncle’s mysterious barn. One animal was infected so we rushed to the opposite side to get away.It was the same on every side so straight away we knew that this was a trap.

The door slammed in our faces trapping us in. The only way out was to break through the window.Then Vincent quickly ran and grabbed a baseball bat and whacked it on the animals head so they can be die fast.

Heading to the window was hard because the obstacles. There were infected animals running around, It was like dodge ball.

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