Monday, 18 February 2013
My Bio Poem
Ioritana
Friendly,kind,funny and supportive
Son of a Mother:KarolineLeifi: Son of a Father:Ioritana Leifi, Brother: of Iakopo, Piula, Robert and Faafetai
Lover of playing rugby,going to the cinemas and mostly playing with my brothers
Who feels excited when I see my brothers playing, Feels like playing when I see my friends playing, Feels good laying on the bed when you finished having a shower
Who has been to Samoa, Savaii and America
Who needs to have a good education in school, Who’s will have a good future,Who will go to University.
Who fears Sharks,Lion and mostly Snakes
Who would like to go back to Samoa,Savaii and America
Resident of Glen Innes
Leifi
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2 comments:
Nice Work Tana.
Its your brother here Faaiua. You had a very good story because you had commas and telling the world about your family. But did you check your writing because there was a few mistakes in your story. The mistakes were, "Who’s will have a good future".
That was a very good story Tana, Cant wait for your next story.
Peace Out. :)``
Nice job Tana - hve you ever seen a snake? I don't like even seeing them on TV!
Make sure you proof read before you post.
Mrs Nua
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