Tana Writing

We had a nice day it was cool and fun. Our first activity was to do a christmas tree. We got put into groups. My group was group 4. It was hard because this was my first time making a christmas tree with paper strings and tape. After we made it we have to go into the streets and show it to the teachers. We came nowhere but we still had fun.   


On our second activity was the slingshot that was my favorite one. We had to make a ball with paper, then tape so it can make it tight .Then get the slingshot. Then we can shoot it, but some of the team have to go catch the ball when we shoot it. When you catch the ball you have a balloon but you need to catch three. But after we got three balloon but we still came second.

Tana writing sample Term4

Once upon a time there was a man called Michael that went with his wife and his family to the bush.They went to the bush for a run.They had three children. There names were John, Vincent and Junior. The oldest was John, but the smallest was Junior. They were walking and talking. Afterwards they started to run. While they were running they forgot Junior. When they were running, Michael asked a question to Vincent “where is Junior?. Vincent said he was at the back of me but then he was gone.

So they all came back and look for Junior. When Junior knowed that he was by himself, he got scared, he sprinted to look for his family. But when he was running he tripped over and crack his head on the rock. He was lying down crying because his head hurts. When Michael, John and vincent were looking for Junior. John heard a voice off some crying and saying help. John knew that was Junior so he was sprinted and he saw Junior. John called out Dad I found Junior. John was like are you alright brother. Junior answered back Yea but i need to go to the hospital fast. So Michael called the ambulance. When the ambulance got there Junior’s mother was crying saying please take my son to the hospital fast. So they all rushed to the hospital. When they got there he went straight to the doctor. One hour later the doctor came outside and said he is ok but you have to look after him. So they all went back home and they lived happy ever after.   

Lave and Tana and Marvin Barnyard Narittive

The sky was dim and the grass covered in dew. As two cousin were going to their uncle’s house they were moaning and complaining.  “I DON’T want to go there said Jacob “me too said’’  Vincent.

“I don’t like all the boards slapping,screeching noise,shafts of light and most of all it smells musty” said Jacob.Vincent didn’t like the fact that there uncle owned a barn.But they still got forced to  go to their uncle's barn.

Shivvers tingle down our spine while we explore the uncle’s mysterious barn. One animal was infected so we rushed to the opposite side to get away.It was the same on every side so straight away we knew that this was a trap.

The door slammed in our faces trapping us in. The only way out was to break through the window.Then Vincent quickly ran and grabbed a baseball bat and whacked it on the animals head so they can be die fast.

Heading to the window was hard because the obstacles. There were infected animals running around, It was like dodge ball.