This morning we had 40 minutes to write anything we wanted. From this we are going to set some writing goals for the Term Here is what I wrote
On the holidays October 10th Thursday it was my Birthday. I woke up in the morning i walked into the bathroom to wash my face forgetting that it was my birthday, suddenly from out of no where my cousins yells ‘happy birthday Tana ‘.
I was so excited. My cousins took me to paint ball, my brother bought me a Rabbitohs jersey,my Uncle gave me money and my favourite, my Parents bought a massive feed. After all they sang the birthday song for me and we ate all together after. It was one of the best day of my life
The things that I like about my writing is that I'm using speech marks and my sentences making sense.
My goal for my writing is having interesting vocabs and showing not tell.
