Tana writing sample Term4

Once upon a time there was a man called Michael that went with his wife and his family to the bush.They went to the bush for a run.They had three children. There names were John, Vincent and Junior. The oldest was John, but the smallest was Junior. They were walking and talking. Afterwards they started to run. While they were running they forgot Junior. When they were running, Michael asked a question to Vincent “where is Junior?. Vincent said he was at the back of me but then he was gone.

So they all came back and look for Junior. When Junior knowed that he was by himself, he got scared, he sprinted to look for his family. But when he was running he tripped over and crack his head on the rock. He was lying down crying because his head hurts. When Michael, John and vincent were looking for Junior. John heard a voice off some crying and saying help. John knew that was Junior so he was sprinted and he saw Junior. John called out Dad I found Junior. John was like are you alright brother. Junior answered back Yea but i need to go to the hospital fast. So Michael called the ambulance. When the ambulance got there Junior’s mother was crying saying please take my son to the hospital fast. So they all rushed to the hospital. When they got there he went straight to the doctor. One hour later the doctor came outside and said he is ok but you have to look after him. So they all went back home and they lived happy ever after.