Tana's week 2 writing

Once upon a time there was a Lion and a Hyena. They went hunting and the killed a deer. When they got the deer,the Lion “said’ can we eat now and Hyena “said” no Lets cook it first. But the lions “said” where’s the fire than. The Hyena “said Look at that Big circle thing shining over the hills go get some fire from it. The lion was running to get some fire. The lion didn't know that the hyena tricked him to go get the fire while he’s eating the deer.

The lion run and run as fast as he can but the fire when under ground. He came back and said to the Hyena while I was running to get the fire the fire was going underground. The Lion “said” so where is the deer. The Hyena said while you were running the deer was going under the ground to. The Lion got angry that he ate the Hyena and he lived dum ever after