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Wednesday 13 November 2013

Writhing Sample 2013 Term 4


Once upon time at a far, far village called Papakura, their lived a boy name Ben and a father named John. They lived in a tiny house with no tv ,no food and no money. They were the poorest in the village. Him and his dad does the papers to get money . People laughs at them, teased them and worst they throw rubbish at their house.

Then one night Ben and John went to do the papers. They were doing it normal walking slowly, then suddenly they heard a whisper from the bushes it whispered again and again and again. John said to his son ‘’hurry hurry I think their someone following us’. They started walking faster then suddenly someone just jumped out of the bush and started to  chase them.

They ran as fast as they can with the papers falling down.  John was starting to get tired. ‘Come’ said  Ben, then his father said ‘’you run i will take care of the person that is coming’. Ben started to run. The men caught up to John.

John hitted him with the papers then he tackled him to the ground, but the man just pushed him of. Then from nowhere the man pulled a gun out to shoot him but lucky Ben knocked him out with a rock on his hand. John said to his son ‘’I thought I told you to run’ Ben ‘’said its better together’.They laughed and they took the criminal to the police station and they rewarded one thousand dollar and they live happily ever after.

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